Services
Developmental Editing: Deep Story Crafting from the Ground Up
~ This is the big-picture edit. A deep dive into what's working, what's not, and exactly how to fix it.
~ My editorial letter gives you a clear, structured breakdown of your story's plot, characterization and development, dialogue, setting, pacing, and themes.
~ I provide solutions to help you strengthen all of these aspects as well as address any structural concerns to make sure your narrative is as compelling and authentic as you intended.
~ There's no vague feedback here, just actionable insights you can actually use.
You'll receive:
1. A detailed editorial letter (10-30 pages) that shows you exactly how to fix your story snags.
2. In-depth inline comments made directly in your manuscript to guide you scene by scene. (These also have the added bonus of showing you how a reader perceives your work in real time.)
3. 1:1 post-edit support to brainstorm ideas, troubleshoot weak spots, and refine your vision so you can approach your final draft with perfect confidence. I remain available for 8 weeks after, to answer any questions or concerns about the edits.
Average turnaround time: 3 weeks
Pricing: $0.018/word
Line Editing: Where Good Writing Becomes Irresistible Prose
~ This is where your draft starts to sound like the book you meant to write.
~ Line editing focuses on flow, rhythm, clarity and tone.
~ I smooth awkward phrasing, trim the fat, tighten transitions, vary structure, and make every line feel intentional.
You'll receive:
1. Sentence-level edits for polish, impact and personality.
2. Cuts that reduce repetition and wordiness without losing your unique voice.
3. Refined tone and style for consistency from page one to "The End."
4. In-manuscript comments to explain each choice and teach as you revise.
Average turnaround time: 3 weeks
Pricing: $0.02/word
Copy Editing + Proofreading: The Final Polish Before You Publish
~ This is the last stop before your book hits the shelves ─ where we catch the tiny things that could trip up readers or break immersion.
~ I correct spelling, grammar, punctuation, syntax and formatting with a sharp eye and clean hands.
~ No lazy skims, autocorrect or spellcheck reliance.
You'll receive:
1. Grammar, punctuation and spelling fixes.
2. Consistent formatting for names, dates and key details.
3. Correction of logic slips, timeline hiccups, and layout inconsistencies.
4. A custom style sheet to track decisions across the manuscript.
Average turnaround time: 2 weeks
Pricing: $0.016/word
THE PLATINUM PACKAGE: All-in-One, Publication-Ready Polish
~ For authors who want to do it once, and do it right.
~ This full-service editing bundle includes all three rounds of editing your manuscript needs to be confidently publication (or submission) ready.
You'll receive:
1. Developmental Editing
2. Line Editing
3. Copy editing + Proofreading
Why go Platinum?
1. Save 5% on the total cost of individual services.
2. Get a flexible payment plan designed to make things easy and stress-free.
3. Streamline your process by working with one editor from start to finish.
Manuscript Evaluation: Honest Reader Reactions with Editorial Insight
~ Want to know how your story actually lands with readers before it's out in the world?
~ This isn't your average beta read. As a professional editor, I bring both gut-level reader reactions and sharp editorial insight to every page. Through my extensive inline comments, I capture my reactions as they happen ─ confusion, excitement, boredom, surprise ─ so you can see exactly what's working and what's falling flat. I don't just say what I feel; I show you why, and what to do if something isn't working.
You'll receive:
1. Inline comments that capture real-time reader reactions and explain them through a craft-focused lens.
2. A comprehensive reader's report offering a big-picture overview of your story, highlighting what's working and pinpointing areas that need attention.
3. Light suggestions for improvement. No heavy developmental editing, just actionable advice from someone who understands storytelling.
Perfect if: You're happy with your plot and don't want major rewrites, but you do want a fresh, professional perspective before querying, self-publishing, or revising further, with the possibility of making minor adjustments.
Average turnaround time: 2 weeks
Pricing: $0.016/word
Story Consultation: From Idea to First Draft, Without the Guesswork
~ Got a story idea but no clue where to start?
~ This package is designed for first-time writers and beginners who want to skip the confusion and build a solid, exciting foundation for their novel.
~ If you're not particularly keen on floundering in the dark before you gain your footing, then this is perfect for you.
You'll receive:
1. A comprehensive editorial review of your story idea, synopsis, or outline, including expert feedback on its potential, clarity and originality.
2. A story development report packed with suggestions, questions, prompts and insights to help you shape a compelling plot, cast, setting and theme.
3. A custom writing roadmap ─ a flexible step-by-step plan to help you finish your first draft in approximately 3 months.
4. Accountability support. (Me!) Featuring regular check-ins and encouraging messages to help you stay focused and motivated.
Average turnaround time: 2 weeks
Pricing: $800 flat fee
Please Note:
~ All prices are in US dollars.
~ There are payment plans available for every single package.
~ I look forward to working with you!💜